englisches Bewerbungsschreiben

[tiffi]

Hallo

ich könnte eure hilfe gebrauchen.
und zwar möchte ich mich gerne in England im Hotelfach bewerben;
als erstes möchte ich euch bitten ob ihr meine bewerbung mal durchlesen könnt und vielleicht verbesserungsvorschläge habt,
dann möchte ich diese bewerbung gerne mit einfliessen lassen das mein englisch nicht perfekt ist, dass ich dies jedoch unbedingt ändern möchte was auch ein grund ist warum ich nach england möchte..
okay ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen, danke schonmal an alle die sich die mühe machen.

Dear Mrs. and Mr…
with great interest i read your information about your hotel. The position you offered,sounds very responsive for me, I would like to introduce myself as a motivated employee, the guests' satisfaction is my focus.

I was fascinated from the beginning of direct contact with the guests, and primarily the resonance between excellent service and a satisfied guest. Therefore the friendliness and attention not meaningless words for me, it is the foundation for my daily occurrence.
My previous responsibilities were in addition to reservations, check-in and check-out, and the daily posting.

I see my strengths is that I can be very good at dealing with people and not even under heavy workload, the overview and the outward calm keep. Friendliness to the guests, colleagues and superiors for me also a matter of course.

I'm happy to occupy that position in your house and let my professional qualifications, incorporate personal experiences and motivations.
I see this as a logical step for me in terms of my professional fulfillment and advancement.

Dear Mrs. and Mr…, for any further information, please contact me in a personal interview and complete your first impressions of my application materials

Sincerely,

[workaholic]

"responsive" in dem zusammenhang sagt man glaub ich echt nicht
"please contact me in a personal interview" --> "please contact me FOR a personal interview"
"I see my strengths is that I can" ---> "I see my strengths ARE that I can"